The following 100% legit chapter takes place between chapter 10 and chapter 11, when Mr. Brocklehurst leaves Lowood and Jane stays as a teacher.
New Chapter:
The change is marvellous! With Mr. Brocklehurst gone, we don't live in fear, at least not any more. Everything has improved dramatically. In my entire life I haven't spent such a pleasant time, not even those days back in the old Gateshead where I used to read, by myself, with a silent and calmed atmosphere. Not even a single fly bothering me. Not to mention, the only thing that could make this better would be Helen here by my side. I cant think of how she would envy the circumstances we are in now. Who knows, maybe every little thing that is improving is her doing. As a mater of fact she was quite a religious young girl. Thinking about the things I would enjoy right now, I would savour the look on Mrs. Reed face regarding what I am really capable of, show her my grades, how I excel in everything here at Lowood, but that situation will never present itself, for it, I already plighted myself that I would never attribute my time or attention to that disgraceful living soul. Because of what she did, I will never excuse her, and one of my biggest desire in life is that she becomes conscious of her acts. What kind of person does that, who in the world is capable of such a treatment. Just the thought of her made me sick in every possible way.
New Chapter:
The change is marvellous! With Mr. Brocklehurst gone, we don't live in fear, at least not any more. Everything has improved dramatically. In my entire life I haven't spent such a pleasant time, not even those days back in the old Gateshead where I used to read, by myself, with a silent and calmed atmosphere. Not even a single fly bothering me. Not to mention, the only thing that could make this better would be Helen here by my side. I cant think of how she would envy the circumstances we are in now. Who knows, maybe every little thing that is improving is her doing. As a mater of fact she was quite a religious young girl. Thinking about the things I would enjoy right now, I would savour the look on Mrs. Reed face regarding what I am really capable of, show her my grades, how I excel in everything here at Lowood, but that situation will never present itself, for it, I already plighted myself that I would never attribute my time or attention to that disgraceful living soul. Because of what she did, I will never excuse her, and one of my biggest desire in life is that she becomes conscious of her acts. What kind of person does that, who in the world is capable of such a treatment. Just the thought of her made me sick in every possible way.
Too much thinking about the past, I must really concentrate on the future, my future, I know it is a big step but I am already pondering on the choices I have got for when I grow up. Numberless opportunities come to mind but one of them overshadows the rest, the fact of teaching kids, orphan kids, people who are actually similar to me in any possible way truly inspires me, not only be on their lives but improve and make a real change for them the way Miss Temple did with me makes me want to finish school here at Lowood and work my life in the same place, stay as a teacher. Besides, I have good grades and I already know everyone at school. If I leave anywhere else I would be lost, moving somewhere else means adapting to other people and other situations, and I believe that I would have a real problem trying to adapt to somewhere else than Lowood. Thinking about the positive and negative outcomes of staying here at Lowood didn't really help me get to my final decision. I not only accepted the idea of staying here but I was happy of it, but in the other side, staying just in one place would mean few life experience, I would only know Lowood, so I left it to Miss Temple's judgement. It was already late and I had to go to bed, so I thought it was better for both of us to talk the next morning.
I talked to Miss Temple of what she thought of me becoming one of Lowood's teacher, I felt great as soon as she knew that she herself was my inspiration, I was astonished the moment she told me that she agreed in every possible way, strange thing, in fact, she seemed more confident of the decision than me. Probably she recognizes a possible teacher when she sees one. I was doubtless that I would make a exceptional teacher for Lowood, so I had no possible doubt on my decision. I was finally convinced, I'm finally inclining to going through with the idea of becoming a teacher, it is my final decision, becoming a teacher at Lowood is what I really want to do, I think I am ready and I would be proud of helping kids, who knows, maybe I will meet someone just like me, someone who is frightened of the world, and somehow, she actually found a place in this huge world where she actually fits in, and maybe make a change on her life. A change that may possible make her remember me through the years like I will with Miss Temple.
Years have simple fly by, being a teacher is tough but results are of great significance. The important thing is that I not only teach kids but I actually learn valuable lessons from them, so its actually in every one's interest to stay day by day here. I'm coming back to my thoughts because I think my clock is ticking here at Lowood. I've learned so much in here but I think its time to go-ahead with my life. As Miss Temple was my inspiration to stay in Lowood as a teacher she is also my inspiration to many other things. Miss Temple is leaving Lowood, but not because she is tired or disappointed, she is actually leaving because something very unique is happening to her, she is getting married. I'm actually looking forward to her joy in life, but as she is making a change on her life after all these years, I think I must also make a change in my life. As she must concern on her wedding I don't want to bother her by telling her what I am planning on doing, so I will just keep it a secret for myself, or at least until I think its the right moment to tell her. I will start as soon as possible searching for somewhere I could go and keep on with my life.
Rationale:
The first thought I had while reading Jane Eyre was, how is it possible that Jane tells us every single detail of something important that happened in her life, her childhood and what happened later on her life, she even describes places, her feelings and emotions, other people surrounding her, but when the time comes that Mr. Brocklehurst leaves Lowood and everything is supposed to be better, its like she skipped all the important content of her life as a student and later teacher, she barely mentions it, she doesn't mention how she felt or something else that could be going on with her. This happens the same time when she lost her dear friend Helen, maybe that made her feel different and didn't know how to express it, but any ways. So I thought, maybe as we have to link it to Text and Context, maybe I can create with my own imagination what happened during these 8 years of Jane's life. Explore aspects like what made her stay as a teacher, or what made her leave. I chose this because until what we have read, its the only blank spot I could find in the book, the only part that I thought should have been filled with more content. No special audience for this invented chapter, just people who read or are reading Jane Eyre and want to have my idea of what could happened in this part of the novel.
Written Task Words: 913
Rationale Words: 243
Years have simple fly by, being a teacher is tough but results are of great significance. The important thing is that I not only teach kids but I actually learn valuable lessons from them, so its actually in every one's interest to stay day by day here. I'm coming back to my thoughts because I think my clock is ticking here at Lowood. I've learned so much in here but I think its time to go-ahead with my life. As Miss Temple was my inspiration to stay in Lowood as a teacher she is also my inspiration to many other things. Miss Temple is leaving Lowood, but not because she is tired or disappointed, she is actually leaving because something very unique is happening to her, she is getting married. I'm actually looking forward to her joy in life, but as she is making a change on her life after all these years, I think I must also make a change in my life. As she must concern on her wedding I don't want to bother her by telling her what I am planning on doing, so I will just keep it a secret for myself, or at least until I think its the right moment to tell her. I will start as soon as possible searching for somewhere I could go and keep on with my life.
Rationale:
The first thought I had while reading Jane Eyre was, how is it possible that Jane tells us every single detail of something important that happened in her life, her childhood and what happened later on her life, she even describes places, her feelings and emotions, other people surrounding her, but when the time comes that Mr. Brocklehurst leaves Lowood and everything is supposed to be better, its like she skipped all the important content of her life as a student and later teacher, she barely mentions it, she doesn't mention how she felt or something else that could be going on with her. This happens the same time when she lost her dear friend Helen, maybe that made her feel different and didn't know how to express it, but any ways. So I thought, maybe as we have to link it to Text and Context, maybe I can create with my own imagination what happened during these 8 years of Jane's life. Explore aspects like what made her stay as a teacher, or what made her leave. I chose this because until what we have read, its the only blank spot I could find in the book, the only part that I thought should have been filled with more content. No special audience for this invented chapter, just people who read or are reading Jane Eyre and want to have my idea of what could happened in this part of the novel.
Written Task Words: 913
Rationale Words: 243